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Vicarious
the taste
of berries
cloudberries
blueberries
juneberries
sweet
smoky
velvet
on your tongue
not mine
this poem was inspired by a prompt for OSI
and also for this month's theme at CED
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Come on, you should go ahead and give them a try. :)
Posted by: Loch Rob | April 11, 2010 at 08:24 PM
Oh yum! I can taste them!
Posted by: Gina | April 12, 2010 at 03:54 PM
You did cover the senses on this one,if they were mine they'd be gone by now.
Posted by: Tammy | April 12, 2010 at 07:01 PM
yum!! love this!
Posted by: leah | April 12, 2010 at 08:05 PM
oh yes, your words and the photograph have my tongue eager and excited!
Posted by: Lis | April 12, 2010 at 10:35 PM
What a clever piece this is!
Posted by: Tumblewords | April 12, 2010 at 10:45 PM
How could it be?
Not in your tongue but other's tongue?
nice poem Julie!
Posted by: Amity | April 13, 2010 at 03:28 AM
Yum...
Posted by: Kim Mailhot | April 13, 2010 at 11:10 AM
I can only think of one way this could work... and it's wonderful. Thanks.
Posted by: Mojo | April 13, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Ahh brings thoughts of summer! Love your poems:)
Posted by: Bobbi | April 16, 2010 at 09:45 AM
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Come on, you should go ahead and give them a try. :)
Posted by: Loch Rob | April 11, 2010 at 08:24 PM
Oh yum! I can taste them!
Posted by: Gina | April 12, 2010 at 03:54 PM
You did cover the senses on this one,if they were mine they'd be gone by now.
Posted by: Tammy | April 12, 2010 at 07:01 PM
yum!! love this!
Posted by: leah | April 12, 2010 at 08:05 PM
oh yes, your words and the photograph have my tongue eager and excited!
Posted by: Lis | April 12, 2010 at 10:35 PM
What a clever piece this is!
Posted by: Tumblewords | April 12, 2010 at 10:45 PM
How could it be?
Not in your tongue but other's tongue?
nice poem Julie!
Posted by: Amity | April 13, 2010 at 03:28 AM
Yum...
Posted by: Kim Mailhot | April 13, 2010 at 11:10 AM
I can only think of one way this could work... and it's wonderful. Thanks.
Posted by: Mojo | April 13, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Ahh brings thoughts of summer! Love your poems:)
Posted by: Bobbi | April 16, 2010 at 09:45 AM