on your tongue
this poem was inspired by a prompt for OSI
and also for this month's theme at CED
Posted at 12:44 PM in creative every day, poetry | Permalink
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Come on, you should go ahead and give them a try. :)
Loch Rob |
April 11, 2010 at 08:24 PM
Oh yum! I can taste them!
April 12, 2010 at 03:54 PM
You did cover the senses on this one,if they were mine they'd be gone by now.
April 12, 2010 at 07:01 PM
yum!! love this!
April 12, 2010 at 08:05 PM
oh yes, your words and the photograph have my tongue eager and excited!
April 12, 2010 at 10:35 PM
What a clever piece this is!
April 12, 2010 at 10:45 PM
How could it be?
Not in your tongue but other's tongue?
nice poem Julie!
April 13, 2010 at 03:28 AM
Kim Mailhot |
April 13, 2010 at 11:10 AM
I can only think of one way this could work... and it's wonderful. Thanks.
April 13, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Ahh brings thoughts of summer! Love your poems:)
April 16, 2010 at 09:45 AM
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